Comments on: The Friend Catcher

By: Paul D. Brazill

Paul D. Brazill — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 21:12:42 +0000

Thanks Michael. I’ve recommended the site to a few people and I think you’ll be getting a few submissions soon!

By: MJG

MJG — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 00:01:24 +0000

An excellent haul of comments Paul, am very pleased indeed I published this. Agreed with everyone above, the story stood out to me from the very beginning, the setting and characters quite unique.

By: Paul D. Brazill

Paul D. Brazill — Mon, 05 Oct 2009 16:21:07 +0000

Thanks very, very much everyone.

By: Michael Brown

Michael Brown — Mon, 05 Oct 2009 01:02:23 +0000

Paul, this held me from beginning to end. I figured from the setting that something was going to happen to someone, but I didn’t see your ending coming. Boffo. I’ll read your stuff anytime.

By: Jeanette Cheezum

Jeanette Cheezum — Fri, 02 Oct 2009 19:56:28 +0000

Paul, I love this just as much the second time around. The way you spin your web captures the whole audience.

By: Col Bury

Col Bury — Fri, 02 Oct 2009 12:27:39 +0000

Enjoyed this, Paul.
Particularly liked the turns of phrases and the twist that Charlotte was the real psycho.
Good stuff.